Kappaleen sanat
The gate squeezes and makes
an unwanted sound
Heavy sighs between now and then
constant unease in pressure.
There are still, what was left,
the remains
Conditioned by surroundings
left to stand for the rain,
a process in all its spontaneity
but steel is made to withstand.
Filth and corrosion.
Rusty bloom.
Rusty Stain.
Rusty Gate
Filth and corrosion.
Rusty bloom.
Rusty Stain.
Rusty Gate
The corrosive colours of rust
stained on the steel gate
Fading bloom pushing through
the surface
In solid reflection
above the still remains.
Cold steel design
shining in the shades of
static industry.
an unwanted sound
Heavy sighs between now and then
constant unease in pressure.
There are still, what was left,
the remains
Conditioned by surroundings
left to stand for the rain,
a process in all its spontaneity
but steel is made to withstand.
Filth and corrosion.
Rusty bloom.
Rusty Stain.
Rusty Gate
Filth and corrosion.
Rusty bloom.
Rusty Stain.
Rusty Gate
The corrosive colours of rust
stained on the steel gate
Fading bloom pushing through
the surface
In solid reflection
above the still remains.
Cold steel design
shining in the shades of
static industry.
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Deviant2 12.02.2023 Kiitos kommentista! Karhealla pinnankäsittelyllä valmistettu metallinen tekele. Jos kuulijalle tulee kappaleesta, tilaisa, ehkä autiohko tunnelma, niin olen onnistunut siinä mitä hainkin. |
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Snacke 11.02.2023 Melko raju ja karkea kappale. Vaikea saada otetta, kun tilaa on kuin 1960-l avokorttelissa; Sitä suuremmalla syyllä tähän olisi voinut parkkeerata jotain, vaikka kirjastoauton. |
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